tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post2307666281317862745..comments2023-04-09T02:23:39.420-07:00Comments on Malvern Wells Class 4 Blog : The sailers sonMr Warnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07867647685037409276noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-36854522644088734452014-02-12T15:01:07.421-08:002014-02-12T15:01:07.421-08:00Great poem. Can you do anotherone LOVED IT!!Great poem. Can you do anotherone LOVED IT!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-9932891951549338192014-02-11T15:18:10.927-08:002014-02-11T15:18:10.927-08:00Nice poem? Keep it up?
from VictoriaNice poem? Keep it up?<br />from VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-34785665231618508932014-02-11T14:57:04.084-08:002014-02-11T14:57:04.084-08:00I really like your poem. It is very creative. Your...I really like your poem. It is very creative. Your rhyming is also really creative.<br />Come and visit my blog Leah at www.hayleysinterestingblog.weebly.com.<br />From HayleyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-71390536038011074752014-02-11T06:56:39.583-08:002014-02-11T06:56:39.583-08:00Great rhyming scheme to this poem,
we love this p...Great rhyming scheme to this poem, <br />we love this pair of lines:<br /><br />When he got home mum went mad, <br />Where have you been she said with a scream,<br /><br />Superb imaginative poetry Leah - Well done, jolly good show!<br /><br />Class 4 Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-10527079764624977132014-02-09T06:34:34.581-08:002014-02-09T06:34:34.581-08:00well done leah i really like the poem unlike the o...well done leah i really like the poem unlike the other 2 poems you have ryhmed the 1st line then the 3rd and so on and i think that is very clever and uniqeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com