tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post3214706535932514914..comments2023-04-09T02:23:39.420-07:00Comments on Malvern Wells Class 4 Blog : Peter's 100 WC Mr Warnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07867647685037409276noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-59046443730983231222015-01-22T11:36:31.419-08:002015-01-22T11:36:31.419-08:00Thanks Mr Westwood and his Year 6's - Your com...Thanks Mr Westwood and his Year 6's - Your commenting has been inspirational, we thank you for the time you put into it. Looking forwards to commenting on some of your fabulous writing in the next few weeks. If you fancy a writing challenge (Perhaps Skype or blogging) let me know and we can arrange some kind of Literacy task, Wells vs Wyche, all for a bit of fun of course! <br />Thanks again - Mr Warne Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-5817146011417292192015-01-22T02:41:34.707-08:002015-01-22T02:41:34.707-08:00Sam L from the Wyche
Can't wait to find out wh...Sam L from the Wyche<br />Can't wait to find out what happens. although there is 101 words, but the story is great!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-70219398311650236612015-01-22T02:41:25.996-08:002015-01-22T02:41:25.996-08:00good describing words maybe you could use a differ...good describing words maybe you could use a different word to sweating <br /><br /><br />Clara from the Wyche schoolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-58488486590331425502015-01-22T02:41:07.416-08:002015-01-22T02:41:07.416-08:00I really like the suspense you have made in your s...I really like the suspense you have made in your story, which made me want to read on. You could try to us some more interesting sentence starters. But over all it's really good.<br /><br />Holly G from the WycheAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-15709194059626456852015-01-22T02:38:49.096-08:002015-01-22T02:38:49.096-08:00Henry from the Wyche school
It was really good but...Henry from the Wyche school<br />It was really good but you did 102 words but it was brilliant😃Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2463821164071640037.post-27780616342094122522015-01-22T02:13:40.499-08:002015-01-22T02:13:40.499-08:00Morning Peter,
We read your 100WC as a whole cla...Morning Peter, <br /><br />We read your 100WC as a whole class this morning, we liked the urgency in your writing regarding the disaster that might happen. The metaphor about the countdown clock added more feeling and the floppy disc put us back in the 80's. We all decided that if your 100 WC started with your last few sentences it would have been more dramatic.<br /><br />Mr Westwood & Green Class - Wyche CE Primary SchoolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com