Ah yes. We knew it was coming. Warriors had truly disappointed Mr.Warne. The opposing team celebrated, one of them grinning at the screen. Suddenly, Mr.Warne turned a deeper shade of red and steam could be seen from his ears. He threw his warriors beanie on the floor. We became silent, all of us crossing our fingers in hopelessness against the thing we knew was going to happen...
"TRIPLE MATHS FOR EV-ER-Y-ONE!!!!!" He screamed and the more the opposing team cheered the more pencils Mr.Warne snapped. "SHARPEN THEM!" All that could be heard was children sharpening pencils.
Sounds about right Phoebe - especially the way the Warriors have played this season!
ReplyDeleteA fabulous piece of writing - great humour and character traits brought to life !! Ha Ha
Well done you!
Great piece of writing Phoebe! Poor Warriors! Mrs Cripps
ReplyDeletegood word choice good short and snappy sentences you really grabbed my attention
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