I painted a road
Where does the road go?
Nobody knows..................
I think the road should lead
to wherever you want it to go!
If it was my road I would want it to go......
to a beautiful countryside covered in snow
there would be ponies, bunnies, penguins and puppy's
and everything would be chocolatey and yummy
Think, if it was your road where would it go?
imagine all your favorite things all in a row.
Let your imagination run free, let your painted road take you to where ever you want to be?
Hattie
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Really good engagement with the reader Hattie - I love the rhetorical devices used to get the reader really thinking about the meaning of the poem
ReplyDeleteMr Warne
I love the flow, the ellipses and it sounds fun and enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteJamie (Suckley)
I like the rhyming couplets, it sounds jolly. Can you write some more!!!
ReplyDeleteIt sounds nice because you've put nice things in like puppies, horses and chocolate!!! Be a bit more careful with punctuation and capital letters.
ReplyDeleteRuby (Suckley)