The City Of Slaves
Petrified,
exhausted, breathless I ran as fast as humanly possible for dread that this
might be the end…
I’m Tips, they call me that ‘cause I’m very fast,
anyway I’m short for my age (I’m 9), I have long brown hair and eyes as bright
and blue as the sky on a cloud less day and I have freckles all over my cheeks
and nose. Moving on, you’re probably wondering how I got myself in so much
trouble, well I’ll tell you.
It started when me and some friends were planning
to search and scavenge for the City Of
Slaves...
I like how you have described Tips hair and her facial details.
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Suckley School
olly from the Wyche. I really like how you described it
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