Tuesday, 13 January 2015

The City Of Slaves

The City Of Slaves

Petrified, exhausted, breathless I ran as fast as humanly possible for dread that this might be the end…

I’m Tips, they call me that ‘cause I’m very fast, anyway I’m short for my age (I’m 9), I have long brown hair and eyes as bright and blue as the sky on a cloud less day and I have freckles all over my cheeks and nose. Moving on, you’re probably wondering how I got myself in so much trouble, well I’ll tell you.

It started when me and some friends were planning to search and scavenge for the City Of Slaves...


  1. I like how you have described Tips hair and her facial details.

    Poppy from
    Suckley School

  2. olly from the Wyche. I really like how you described it


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