It was my 10th
birthday and I slowly unwrapped my last present - a fantastic Storm Trooper
alarm clock. I took it upstairs and put it by my bed, but when I put the
batteries in it I heard a noise and felt a sharp sting on my ear! I heard another
zing and this time saw a tiny hole in the wall. I approached the alarm clock
cautiously and picked it up…”Everything ok in there?” came mum’s voice from
outside the door. Out of the corner of my eye I saw the Storm Trooper’s helmeted
head nod slightly “Ummm, yeah!” I
replied. This was turning into a dangerous birthday.
Wow Ollie that is a very menacing and gripping piece of writing!
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