Wednesday 15 January 2014

100 Word Challenge by Ollie Cripps

It was my 10th birthday and I slowly unwrapped my last present - a fantastic Storm Trooper alarm clock. I took it upstairs and put it by my bed, but when I put the batteries in it I heard a noise and felt a sharp sting on my ear! I heard another zing and this time saw a tiny hole in the wall. I approached the alarm clock cautiously and picked it up…”Everything ok in there?” came mum’s voice from outside the door. Out of the corner of my eye I saw the Storm Trooper’s helmeted head nod slightly  “Ummm, yeah!” I replied. This was turning into a dangerous birthday.



1 comment:

  1. Wow Ollie that is a very menacing and gripping piece of writing!

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