Monday 19 January 2015
Henry's 100 word challenge
Petrified,exhausted,breathless I ran as fast as humanly possible for dread that this might be the end. Slipping sliding through the forest I trembled hopelessly over the treacherous tree roots and the desolate pathway. I heard a faint spine-chilling noise in the distance. Shortly followed by a scream, a terrifying, bloodcurdling scream. I ran over to the noise. There before me stood three, atramentous, shadowy figures each holding a gun covered in sticky, blood that was as red as fire. It was pointed at me. I began to feel like I would be their next victim. The chase had begun.
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Brilliant, wish there was more!!!
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Henry from the Wyche
ReplyDeleteWow that is brilliant the one thing you might need to improve don't start a sentence with I but apart from that it is brilliant 😀
Henry from the Wyche
ReplyDeleteWow that is brilliant the one thing you might need to improve don't start a sentence with I but apart from that it is brilliant 😀
Amelia from the Wyche.
ReplyDeleteThat was really good and I want to know what happens next.
Elliot from the Wyche CE primary school
ReplyDeleteThat is really good 😄
Good sentence starters, this is a good story to make the reader read on
ReplyDeleteEleanor from the Wyche school.
I really like the sentence starters and you have used really good words in there.
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Catherine from the Wyche School
ReplyDeleteWow, who are the people with the guns!? If this were a story instead of a hundred word challenge, then I would love to hear more!
I really like the sentence starters and you have used really good vocab.
ReplyDeletefrom Ruby at the Wyche
I really like your story it's awesome! I think you could make some of your sentences longer.
ReplyDeleteFrom Tara from the Wyche primary school
We think it is very gripping we just want to read on and on
ReplyDeleteBy TIa and Phoebe.m at malvern wells school.
why shouldn't i start a sentence with I Henry?
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