The Incident
I
was playing football with my best friend called Fred when I accidently kicked
my ball into the window. The house was dark, gloomy and everything was rotten. It didn’t look like anyone was in so I rushed
quietly through the door and looked for my ball. In the house it was all gloomy
and dusty with spider webs in every nook, cranny and corner. My ball wasn’t
anywhere in sight so I carried on searching. Just then I passed a shimmering
light. I peeped through the door and saw a lady sat next to a caldron and a
frog…
I love this start to maybe a great book I think this is a wonderful piece of writing! J@M£$ TAYLOR
ReplyDeleteThis sounds so exciting! I'd really like to know what happens next...
ReplyDeleteGreat opening to a story Beth, a good spooky tale, who was the old lady and what happened to your ball?
ReplyDeleteAli and Miles.