Tuesday, 11 March 2014

ollie cooke's 100 word challenge


Imagine a place where there is a sea. Where there are seagulls, and a lighthouse: this place is Fish Fluke Point, Ross Island, Canada. Here an old rotten lighthouse stands. But it is supposed to be like this. Why? Because Bob and Bill had built it to try and win the Worst Building of the Year contest. Bob and Bill had constructed it, entered it and were waiting at the ceremony anxiously like all the other builders. “It’s time to award the winners; the winners are” Bills heart pounded in his chest like a drum. “Bob and Bill.” They’d won!!

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  1. Anonymous11 March 2014 at 12:21

    What a creative way of using this image to bring a story to life Ollie! Great dialogue and a superb opener

    Mr W

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  2. Anonymous13 March 2014 at 13:58

    I agree with Mr Warne I like how u have made the story different to other and how they entered a competition !!!!!!!!:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

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