Monday, 10 November 2014

Oscar's Mum - Another World...

Pierre was a workaholic who got through the day by having three ritualistic tea breaks. Each break lasted precisely five minutes and took place at a specific time -the tea was always made by Big Barry who, as a reward for serving it, was allowed a cuppa himself. No one else in the hotel kitchen was entitled to a tea break. It was a rule that distinguished the boss from his minions. Then came Pierre’s day of reckoning the stability of the hotel’s anchor had failed to secure their future, the building now insecure needed help and quickly …

3 comments:

  1. Very funny and imaginative I like how Pierre is a workaholic.

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  2. I like the fact that Pierre is a workaholic.

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  3. I love how Pierre is a workaholic. It is hilarious and very imaginative and creative. You could have used some speech somewhere in the writing to make it a little more interactive.

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