Exhausted, horrified and confused the children ran from the Thing! It
was huge, over a hundred meters high with thousands of sharp glistening teeth,
ten massive blood red eyes, five powerful muscular legs, fifteen long arms
reaching towards the terrified children. It shook and shivered in it anger as
it tried to catch the children. It viciously ripped branches off trees as they
got in it's way. As it shivered, they ran as fast as they could to get away,
but it was closing in on them every second.
It was then that I woke up. Wow, what a nightmare!
Sounds like me heading to Forest School in a Monday morning! Fabulous description Peter
ReplyDeleteThe start really draws the reader in - you should be proud of this Young man
Mr Warne