BEEP, I dived in to the
pool. The water was freezing but that did not matter. I swam frantically
towards the wall hoping that nobody was in front of me. I could hear my mum and
my coach cheering me on, it was important to win because my brother was racing in
the same race and he was in a different club. Then ‘flick’ the lights went out.
The referee stopped the race and told us to climb out of the pool. So far fate
was against us both.
Everyone was wondering
what or who could have done this, and to make it even worse I was winning the
race. I already knew that whoever did this was in big trouble. The officials
went off to check the power supply and reported back that the main switch was
broken so the whole gala would have to be cancelled, but they would have
another gala in Hereford
next week.
One week later
BEEP, I dived in to the
pool. The water was freezing but that did not matter. I swam frantically
towards the wall hoping that nobody was in front of me. This time there were five
security guards guarding the power switch so nothing would go wrong. I got to
the wall, quickly I tucked myself in to a ball, flipped over and pushed off the
wall hoping that I would have taken the tumble turn to my full advantage. I
looked slightly to the right I could not see anyone. I looked in front nobody
was in front of me. I was winning and I was nearly at the end. I felt my hand
touch the wall, I could hear screaming and I knew I had won.
But then I realised they
were not screaming because I’d won, they were screaming because one of the
swimmers had gone under, in fact they were at the bottom of the pool. I turned
and swam as fast as I could hoping that I could save him. When I pulled him to
the surface I realised that the boy was my brother’s best friend, he started to
breath again, filled with relief I gave him to the life guards.
That’s when everybody
started cheering for me and I felt like this was better than winning. My coach
came over and said “well done, you are a hero” then he pulled a medal out of
his pocket and told me he had won this here 36 years ago.
The next day my mum bought
home the newspaper and on the front page there I was standing with the boy I
saved, the medal around my neck and my whole team in the background. On the
next page it said that our team had won and we were in the regional final, my
brother was so proud he didn’t mind losing. The door bell rang, ‘Ding Dong’, it
was a letter from the Olympic Junior swimming association. My smile could not get
any bigger.
YES! What a fantastic piece of narrative and top marks for being FIRST to upload onto Soundcloud.
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A great engaging opener Oscar - such a clever idea to use something you are passionate about to inspire writing!
A very proud Mr Warne