Friday, 17 April 2015

Breaking news !!!!!



                                       Breaking news !!!!!!!


Breaking news a cloud brakes free from other clouds and is flying incredibly low across the city .  The cloud appears to be influencing people to change their lives for the better. Firstly it went and visited a sad homeless man with lots of problems. It is thought that the cloud changed the way that he thought about living his life persuading him to face his fears and go back home. Amazing! How can a cloud do this? Next the cloud visited fire men trying to put out a massive fire so he hovered over the fire then the cloud rained over the fire and put it out !! Scientists believe..........

2 comments:

  1. I like it at the end when it is says Scientists Believe........!

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  2. I liked the different way of writing the 100 words. Maybe I will try it next time.

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