Thursday 6 February 2014

Ben's 107 word challenge

But all we could see was water, outside of our tiny tank. Looking out I knew we had capsized!  Humans were running around screaming; “We’re going to die!” As soon as one said it they all followed like sheep, bleating loudly.  However, my family were so calm it was unbelievable.  For once we were quiet – no chattering at all.  Thankfully now we were free – in the Ocean. My Dad charged through a porthole and I followed him out in his slipstream – freedom!  We were swimming home!  Thank goodness for my brave dad – he knew what to do in a crisis.  After all I’m only a little calf!  

2 comments:

  1. WOW!!! It reminds me about PGL! Great story

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  2. its really cool i would love to read more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) .

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