My cloud is no ordinary cloud,
You see, he saves many,
In my dream,
The wind cannot control him,
For he has his very own mind,
In my dream,
He is a superhero,
Roaming the skies,
In my dream,
He will explore,
Imagine, dream,wonder,
In my dream,
His heart will be contained in curiosity,
As he floats gracefully,
In my dream,
My cloud will fly,
And I will follow it,
In my dream,
My cloud is a savior,
He is made of more,
In my dream.
Laura I love the repetition of “In my dream." I think that the poem is fabulous. Keep up the excellent work.
ReplyDeleteAs Emma says, I like the words In my dream being repeated. It keeps the reader interested.
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