Friday, 6 December 2013

100 Word Challenge Ben Leah

It was a was burning hot afternoon in London. The tanoid announced that the 100 metre race was starting in ten minutes the crowd went wild because the Jamaican superstar Usain Bolt came out followed by Yohan Blake. By then the crowd was screaming all the contestants were in there starting blocks and Then the noise stopped as the umpire stepped up with his gun “ on your marks, get set” BANG they were of bolt with the lead Blake just behind.

by Ben Leah

5 comments:

  1. I like how you explained everything clearly, and linked it to the Olympics. Try to remember capitals for names though.

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  2. it was very good and interesting i liked it how it was linked to the olympics
    ollie

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  3. thank you Sam and Ollie

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  4. Its really good:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

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