Monday, 29 September 2014
100 word challange - My pet crocodile
The pet shop down our road had lots of unusual animals in it. So one day I went in the shop and I suddenly noticed a baby crocodile. I knew it was a crocodile but I could not resist buying it. As I was meant to get a hamster or a rabbit my mum was not very happy with me when she saw it in the bath. She said 'you cannot keep that thing in the bath. Take it out and put in the lake in the park'. I was upset but did what I was told, although nervous at doing this.
Two years later, on a normal Sunday walk with my mum and dad, we thought we'd go to the park. As we entered the park we saw a big sign saying BEWARE CROCODILE IN LAkE. And sure enough as we got near the lake a huge crocodile was chasing naughty boys!
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Well done Emily I love it.
ReplyDeleteEmily - congratulations upon your first 100WC - A really pleasing piece of writing, I love your use of speech to bring characters to life!
ReplyDeleteMr Warne
A short but snappy piece.. Sorry, I couldn't resist!
ReplyDeleteGood work and an enjoyable read.
Alex.
A short but snappy piece.. Sorry I couldn't resist!
ReplyDeleteVery good. An enjoyable read!
Alex Grove
liked it how you said that you were suppose to be buy a bunny or hamster but you got a crocodile instead.
ReplyDeleteWell done Emily, that was extremely funny and I never wanted it to end.
ReplyDeletethanks
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