Lighthouse down
Imagine a place where the sea no longer
laps the lighthouse: where there are just forests for hundreds of miles; that happened
to one old lighthouse.
It was a well-known light house, but
the owner couldn`t afford to pay for it so it was abandoned. One night there
was a massive storm and because it was a very old lighthouse it got destroyed! The
sea was rough and after many hours of battering the lighthouse the sea calmed
and withdrew for miles leaving the lighthouse standing in the middle of
wasteland where forests grew for hundreds and hundreds of years.
Fabulous opener Eleanor - effective use of the 'Imagine sentence' ! Keep up the super effort in your writing! Very impressed indeed!
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WOW! I like your story, it is very effective. Also, I love your use of sentence types and connectives. Well done! From Maisie. Malvern Parish.
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