Wednesday, 12 March 2014



Ella’s 100 word challenge
Imagine a time when people were never ever upset, when life was much less hard, when everyone got along: this is a story of that time.
It was wrecked. Completely and utterly destroyed, the old light house had once been the best place ever when I was a boy, but now it was just a wreck. I knew I had probably put myself into a how lot of work to get it back to its former glory. The town where the little light house by the sea is called foggyland and I will always love it.

4 comments:

  1. Well done Ella its really good.!!!!!!

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  2. well done Ella really good vocab choices

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  3. Very imagenative you used a great range of punctuation.
    Well Done!
    Ella And Jessie
    Malvern Parish.

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  4. Nice story. Like your sentance types and punctuation.Carry on doing great work!
    Charlotte and Anna.:)

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