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Thursday, 8 May 2014
Peter's 100 word challenge
Suddenly, Mr Warne turned a deeper shade of red and steam could be seen from his ears. I don’t know why but Mr Warne was absolutely mad today, he was throwing table and chairs across the room. The more angry he got the more red he turned, it was crazy. Strangely his tummy was grumbling really loudly, I went up to him and asked Mr Warne what’s wrong. He replied in a very loud voice “I HAVEN’T HAD ANY BREAKFAST AND I HAVE JUST REALISED I FORGOT MY LUNCH!” I then offered to share my lunch then he calmed down.
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Peter - an engaging piece of writing which seems to be a pretty believable scenario! Ha Ha!
ReplyDeleteExcellent speech around spoken words and great verbs used!
Keep it up young man!
good use of punctuation but you missed the"s" out of table but you did very, very well.
ReplyDeleteReally funny peter.
ReplyDeletevery funny peter. good use of speech marks. I like it a lot.
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This really made me laugh Peter. I like your use of capital letters.
ReplyDeleteKate Glover
This is so funny Peter. I like your use of capital letters.
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