Thursday, 5 June 2014

Ben Scott's 100 word

I'm playing football in the park with my friend Harley, so I had a shot on goal but I missed and the ball went all the way through a bush. so me and Harley went  around the bush but we couldn't find it. Then on the corner of my eye I saw something yellow and covered in grease,Harley's eyes were dark tunnels. Suddenly loads of these yellow things started to come towards us. Harley and I screamed. We ran miles and miles, then suddenly out of now where superman came and threw all the yellow things in a river. Then he told us they were all just American school buses...

  


  

2 comments:

  1. Well done Ben! Maybe a bit more description.

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  2. That's funny ben

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