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Thursday, 5 June 2014
Evie's 100 word challenge
How long would it be until we reached The Lodge, I wondered. There were five of us none of whom had ever been away from our parents before. Yes, I know is silly, and I know I am eighteen, but I never had the chance. This was an adventure! As we walked, Kester suddenly tumbled into the ditch! We instantly ran to his rescue, and threw ourselves into ditch after him. As I reached for Kester's arm my hand hit upon an object as smooth and cold as ice! I couldn't help myself, but leave Kester and crawl through the hedge towards it. It was an old abandoned bus. But why was it there.........?
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Really like the suspension at the end! Think your whole classes work is really good.
ReplyDeleteMorning Evie,
ReplyDeleteThe discovery of something new and strange is always exciting who knows where your story could go from here. Why would a bus be lying in a ditch? How did it get there? Why hasn't been removed? All questions we want answers to.
Next time proof read your work through checking the punctuation and check for missing words.
Mr Westwood & Green Class - Wyche CE Primary School