100 word Challenge Ella Watkins Dad.
“Well that went well dear” said Jean
Claude onion, with his blackened face, and monkey wrench.
“Went well!” screamed his wife Marie shallot,
she was prone to over reaction to her long suffering husbands endeavours.
“I only asked you to turn on the gas
to boil the water for the pomme de terre you fool”
“But I smelled gas” he replied feeling
rather foolish.
“It was not the gas; it was your
aftershave, Ari du pong.”
Just at that moment Rupert Hinde Legge
came down, “I say” he bellowed, he adopted the English method of communication,
“how do we get to Montmartre ”?
“very soon monsieur” said Jean Claude
sadly. “very soon”
Ella's Dad, a very clever 100 word challenge which certainly draws in the reader. I particularly enjoyed the character ' Jean Claude Onion' and the description of this shady person!
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We loved this! We particularly loved Ari du pong! However we realised that there is some punctuation missing from the speech. Mrs Stone, Mairi and Jamie
ReplyDeleteI like it well done
ReplyDeleteGreat imaginative work, great names..... Just check some speech punctuation and then it will be perfect.
ReplyDeleteElliot and Harry from the Wyche school that is really good
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