It was another hot day and I was meeting my friends by the river. As we arrived I saw a rope swing on the riverbank. When we went over to the swing my friends dared me to try it. When I got onto it I was shaking with fear. I took a run up and then swung out over the river half way and halfway across a crocodile came up and snapped at my foot. If I hadn't accepted the dare, if I hadn't swung out, if the crocodile hadn't been there, I could still wear a pair of shoes.
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This was funny. It was a clever use of the if, if, if, then sentence.
ReplyDeleteI really like your if, if, if, then sentience and you could wear shoes just without the bit for your foot
ReplyDeletei really liked the ififif then santence were you wereing shose
ReplyDeleteI found myself wondering what this person would look like with no feet!!!!!!
ReplyDeletehattie
I found this story very gripping and liked your title
ReplyDeleteOllie cooke
good work
ReplyDeletelike how its a dare and how it really grips the reader
ReplyDeleteHenry
I like the if if if then sentence
ReplyDeleteLike it Max good work
ReplyDeleteI like it max
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