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should’ve jumped off at the other side of the river but as always I was too
scared to. Which was a huge mistake because just as the person at reception
said there was a load of crocodiles at the bottom of the river and they were obviously
very hungry so as I was swinging over for the second time one of them jumped
out and tried to eat me... If I hadn’t
went on that swing if I had jumped off at the right time if the crocodile hadn’t
been there then I wouldn’t be dead in the river.
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I liked that even though the person at reception warned you about the crocodiles you still did it!
ReplyDeleteI love the idea Vicky. Iwere did you get the idea from ???
ReplyDeletehattie
I love the idea !! Were did you get idea of a "reception" from ?
ReplyDeleteHattie
I love your idea of your if if if then sentience
ReplyDeletehah! great! specially the if if then sentence. But what was with the ending? It was a bit crazy :R
ReplyDeletegreat concept but you wouldn't be writing the story if you were dead- would you.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used the 'if, if. if, then' at the end of the story even though it was a bit grim
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