Thursday, 13 November 2014

Overnight Stay

I woke with a jolt, feeling a strange rolling sensation; what was it? I leapt out of bed and raced to the window. I gasped horrified, my heart raced with terror. We were 200ft above the ground. How? Why? I had walked into this hotel last night from the pavement!

Bang! We pitched forward and entered a steep dive.  I was thrown violently to the floor and as I scrambled to my feet I looked up to see the Hotel signboard "You can check out but you can never leave" careering straight at my head......

3 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed reading this it made me and my mum smile.Apparantly the quote at the end is from a really, really, really old song.

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  2. Really good I liked the words you used like"careering!"

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  3. I think the story is brilliant and it is very imagnitive.

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