“Right, that’s it! We’re ..”
“NO!” shouted Rupert, “No, No, No! Don’t say it! I’m finally
playing in Saturday’s team, Friday’s lunch is Roast Chicken and Jessica
Gillespie is certain to ask me to her party next week!”
“Don’t be ridiculous Rupert;” said his mother dismissively,
“We’re moving!”
With that the house lurched forward and then up. Rupert
watched with dismay as trees, cars and people became smaller and clouds floated
passed the window. Where were they going? Rupert didn't care. It was always the
same, on a complete whim his parents would move house – quite literally – to a
new country.
This is a good piece of writing. You have made good use of speech marks.
ReplyDeletewell done! I really like how when they move house they use the house to move!
ReplyDeleteYou've used a lot of good speech marks in your writing. Well done.
ReplyDeleteLovely description I loved it all.
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