Tilly's 105 word challenge
I was walking along to school with my friend Leah; when the
bushes started to rustle
Leah giggled hysterically “Nice one Till!”
“What? It wasn’t me dumbo, I’m all the way over here!”
“Probably one of the boys then!”
“Yeh.” We carried on walking. Then I heard another noise. I
said “Right that’s it. Who’s in there?” Then out of nowhere came a gorilla riding a pink bicycle
“AGGGGHHHHH!” Leah and I jumped out of our skin; then with a
grand gesture
the gorilla pulled its head off and there stood Darcey grinning
like a Cheshire cat. We all laughed
and walked on to school.
aggghhhh! What's happened to my font colours ignore the black please.
ReplyDeleteThink I've sorted it ! What a fantastic piece of writing Tilly. I love the dialogue and build up to the gorilla riding a bike! Do you approve of the new colour scheme I applied?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work -
Mr W
What a funny piece of writing, and just the sort of prank you three would get up to. Love the build up of tension. Miles C.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mr Warne, and thanks Miles! :)
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