100 Word Challenge-By Ella
Adam looked at his page in horror. As
a small sketched boy dragged himself out of the page.
“Draw, Draw” the boy screamed panting
from his effort.
Adam hurriedly drew the boy some legs
and said nothing. The boy panted and looked at Adam with a triumphant glint in
his eye, Adam just stared he’d just been doodling and all of a sudden a black
and white boy jumps out of his page. He tried to speak but all came out was a
gurgle.
“Who are you” the boy asked.
“Adam, Adam Whiltshire” Adam said
stumbling for words.
The boy sprang from the desk and ran
through the door...
Fantastic! At the start you were in 3rd person, but then you changed into 1st in one sentence.
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Evie
This is really good and very imaginative. Good use of vocabulary.
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From Malvern Parish
Thank you
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