“Sam, look up! Can you see that spaceship?!” asked Peter in astonishment,
“No, what spacesh…” replied Sam “Oh... that one... wh... where did that come from?" asked Sam in total shock. The spaceship was humongous: it would take it hours to cross the town. Peter and Sam were shocked as they saw no-one except them was panicking, in fact no-one even seemed to notice it. They began to think that they were imagining it, "No," Sam told himself "it has to be some kind of hypnotism, Peter what do you think?" Peter replied with "What do I think about what..."
Well done Gentlemen on this collaborative piece of writing! Dis you write it together using Google Docs?
ReplyDeleteExcellent range of punctuation and vocabulary choices. I love the inclusion of you both as well!
Well done
Mr Warne
I like your openers they are realy good!
ReplyDeleteSam and Gino Malvern paris
Great story Peter & Sam
ReplyDeletelot of punctuation & vocaulary
Keep it up. Well done
cs aw Malvern Parish