Sunday 16 November 2014

100wc from Sophie's Mum



Hovering Hotel

“That looks fancy,” said Mildred to Bertie as they flew up beside the impressive hotel, “What a special treat to spend a night away without the fledglings, I do hope they’ll be ok?”It was unheard of for Mr. and Mrs. Blackbird to get away but they’d read the reviews and were excited to finally be arriving at Hovering Hotel.  What they weren’t expecting was the menacing Mr. Crow to be there!  How could they spend the night under the same roof as him?  After what he’d done.  Surely they should let the owners know what he was capable of? 

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