Friday 6 December 2013

100 Word Challenge Ollie Cooke

Steve the elf

Once there lived a elf called Steve, he was an elf for Santa. It was only one month to Christmas so he was working hard making presents. One day they had just got to the last million presents and then the noise stopped. This was a big deal because the present machine worked if there was a ticking noise. Everybody was quiet until the mechanic said "it'll take five months to fix." this wasn't good Christmas was going to be delayed by four months! Luckily BOBBY DOO remembered the time machine. We went back in time and sorted it out "yes!" we had saved Christmas. 

by ollie cooke

5 comments:

  1. Good description! nice start to Christmas

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  2. Funny and comical I can imagine it inside my head!

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  3. good imagination used, love it

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