As I escaped from prison the guards let out their dogs. I could hear them getting closer so I ran into a nearby forest. I was running for my life, dashing past trees, trying to avoid the branches as the thorns scratched me all over. I could see their red glaring eyes glowing at me in the dark. As I kept on running I knew I needed to take a rest. Petrified, exhausted, breathless, I ran as fast as humanly possible, for dread that this might be the end as the dogs closed in on me, I could not go back.
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i love it, it gripped me alot good job maybe you could add some speech/i like the ending
ReplyDeleteGreat work but you could use a bit more adjectives or speech
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