Monday, 20 April 2015

A cloud made of more - by Emily

A cloud made of more
'Breaking news,
 on the hottest day of the year Jack Daw spied a lonesome cloud drifting from the sea. It stopped over a man sunbathing who was not that amused. It quickly moved on and found traffic lights which it covered. This caused mayhem to the drivers at which point it moved on again looking a little lost. Feeling rejected it tried to hide in an underground car park but a fierce hound felt the cloud was invading its territory and barked it away. In its rush to move off it squeezed through building until it found its purpose. A fire! Turning dark it let rain pour down and then disappeared. A cloud made of more.

1 comment:

  1. great work since we've been doing newspaper reports, loved the word lonesome


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