100 Word Challenge Hatty
If Steve Bachel had not married Naomi Wilkinson on a pirate ship on the way to the awesome challenge. If they had not decided to go to the W.H. Smith jungle in the middle of nowhere for their honeymoon. If Steve had not had a thousand extra minty lamb burgers stuffed into the pockets of his pants and if Naomi hadn't dared Steve to hang over a crocodile-infested swamp. If Steve didn't always accept Naomi's dares then Steve would not now be living in a crocodiles body and Naomi would not have loads of funky jungle stationary, especially rubbers.
The Wh smith jungle sounds like a good holday place
ReplyDeleteI think the way you included Steve B and Naomi in a 100 word challenge is very cool.
ReplyDeleteit was a very good story hat and why did Steve and Naomi get married?
ReplyDeleteHattie - I am awarding you the prestigious WRITER OF THE WEEK AWARD
ReplyDeleteSuch a creative piece of writing - Really proud as so much thought has gone into this!
Mr Warne
That was so funny and well done for being writer of the week!
ReplyDeleteThat was the craziest (and best) thing I've read so far! the if if if then sentence was great but maybe don't use it throughout. try another alan peat sentence :-)
ReplyDeleteThe W.H. Smith jungle sounds extremely weird. It was very imaginative and made me laugh.
ReplyDeleteThat's funny because I like the idea of w.h.s in the jungle.
ReplyDeletei want to know what happens .what does hppen?
ReplyDeleteAlice