Tuesday 8 April 2014

Ollie Cooke's 100 word challenge

Bob was going to PGL, he was excited. But first he had a three hour journey ahead of him. Finally after what seemed like years they arrived.  At a half destroyed castle with no on the edge of a ‘small’ cliff plummeting down 200M! This was not what Bob or anyone else was thinking of. To make matters worse Bob had forgotten his suitcase, there were no dorms, the only activities were climbing up the cliff or searching the forest for food and the coach had broken down. This was going to be a long couple of days for Bob!

1 comment:

  1. Well written Ollie - Bob must have been a little concerned with this predicament he was in!
    Excellent use of irony in your writing 3DJ Points
    Mr W

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