Thursday, 8 May 2014

Suddenly, Mr Warne turned a deeper shade of red and steam could be seen from his ear.

Suddenly, Mr Warne turned a deeper shade of red and steam could be seen from his ear. He was watching Worcester warriors against Gloucester and the more Gloucester was winning the more mad he got, he took his shoes off and threw and smashed it at the TV and turned on his mac book and then booked 4 tickets to Worcester warriors last home game. Took his TV to a...blacksmiths!? To get it fixed but then took TV to pro. Got back home Went on his iPad to only see that he had tickets to Gloucester not Worcester warriors. Aaaaaahhhhhhh screamed mr Warne.

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  2. I really like this story its very funny and imaginative but my only criticism is that you might want to make
    what's happening in the story a bit clearer.
    ollie cooke

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