Thursday, 8 May 2014

100 word challenge - Darcey

Suddenly, Mr Warne turned a deeper shade of red and steam could seen coming from his ears. The class laughed at his magnificent steam train impression! "Another! Again!" Class 4 cried! Then Mr Warne was a cow, a goat, a sheep! The children were in fits of laughter. "More!" The kids all yelled. 
"That's enough for today!" Mr Warne answered.
"One more!" They pleaded. 
"Just one." he agreed. Mr Warne waddled around the classroom   clucking like a chicken. The more Mr Warne clucked the more Class 4 chuckled. "Mental Maths!" Mr Warne declared 
"Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!" The class groaned. 
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  1. Anonymous9 May 2014 at 03:25

    That is really good Darcey I loved it because instead of Mr Warne being angry you've made him be happy and the class are happy at the start but then they get mental maths (perfect imitation) Well done

    Ella

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  2. Anonymous9 May 2014 at 03:34

    Well done Darcey really good piece of writing.

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  3. Vicky and Eleanor9 May 2014 at 03:42

    It's really funny and there is a really good choice of vocabulary.

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