Suddenly, Mr Warne turned a deeper shade of red, steam could be seen from his ears and at that moment we heard “I got every number except one on the lottery.” All of class 4 stopped and looked at Mr Warne...
As Finn entered the room, he asked “Why are you so mad Mr Warne?”
The more Mr Warne raged the more class 4 got scared. Later that day Mr Warne let us go home, however one student didn’t leave because he had an after school club and so he sat in the class room all alone listening to Mr Warne huff and puff.
As Finn entered the room, he asked “Why are you so mad Mr Warne?”
The more Mr Warne raged the more class 4 got scared. Later that day Mr Warne let us go home, however one student didn’t leave because he had an after school club and so he sat in the class room all alone listening to Mr Warne huff and puff.
By Dan
A great piece of writing, and I think the ending is very affective! Well done Dan!
ReplyDeleteA funny piece of writing Dan from Oliver Cr
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