My pet crocodile
If the
crocodile had been bigger, if he hadn't been staring at me, if he hadn't had
the white spot in-between his big brown eyes, then I wouldn't have known that
he was my pet crocodile Gums. I called him this because he has no teeth.
Every Sunday
I take him to the park, but I don’t understand why everybody runs away? At
least we get the river to ourselves so we can splash and play, also, Gums and I
can get some exercise. Afterwards we go to McDonald's to get a burger; VIP style
and funnily enough, no queue!
By Beulah.H.
Love the idea of a crocodile with no teeth!!
ReplyDeleteReally quirky and entertaining writing - perhaps Gums the toothless croc could become the star of a series of children's books :)
ReplyDeleteVery funny a croc with no teeth and a VIP McDonalds
ReplyDeleteloves it special the mc Donald's part
ReplyDeleteHaha! Love it love it. Specially the funnily no queue bit. But the only problem is I want more!
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