Monday, 6 October 2014

The Coming Together Of Man And Machine!

My finger pressed the green call symbol. Slowly, effortlessly, roots came out of the handset and gradually started to entangle themselves around my hand like convolvulus. The more my wrist struggled, the more it twined around my digits. This had to be trickery! My arm turned blacker and blacker. This was becoming a ghastly daymare! With my neck becoming stained charcoal hue, I wondered whether this phone was a portable horror! I stopped struggling. Gradually the tentacles began to unravel themselves in a dreamy, retracting, serpentine fashion.Finally I got my hand free after six hours of being enmeshed! Mobile misery!
                       by John

3 comments:

  1. Mobile misery indeed! Excellent vocab choice John - really grips the reader and describes the action of man v phone

    Well written and excellent use of 'The more the more' sentence .

    Mr Warne

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  2. Great story John - love the word choices!

    Mrs Cripps

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  3. Love the word choices

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