Friday 17 January 2014

100 word challenge the boomerang seemed to have a min of it's own

 One day there lived a boy named bob,one morning he woke up to find a parcel had arrived from his auntie who lives in Astralia. He opened it up and found a boomerang,"wow" said bob I Carnot wait to go and play with it. The next day he woke up and got dressed as quickly as he could,then he had his breakfast and went outside to play with his boomerang. But the boomerang seemed to have a mind of it's own. It went all the way to Astralia and on the beach and all the way back again. I think it was home sick.

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  1. Anonymous18 January 2014 at 04:58

    This is really interesting piece of writing. John

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  2. Anonymous21 January 2014 at 08:05

    I really liked it. But just remember to check your spelling
    ollie

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  3. Unknown23 January 2014 at 08:34

    I enjoyed reading this short piece of writing. Well done.

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  4. Unknown23 January 2014 at 08:35

    I enjoyed reading this short piece. Well done

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