Monday 19 January 2015
Vicky's 100word challenge
Petrified, exhausted, breathless I ran as fast as humanly possible for fear this might be the end! On and on I ran taking the harder route to try to lose them in the thick undergrowth. I looked back, big mistake I tripped over a hidden tree root and cursed. My chasers were closing in on me fast, panicking I pulled myself up of the floor and stumbled on, quickly going into a sprint but as I ran into the heart of the woods I heard a distinctive sound, one which I really didn't won't to hear. The sound of wolves.
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I really like the way you didn't tell who your chaser was. It made me really want to read on to see what happened next.
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Alfie from the Wyche school
ReplyDeleteGreat words like breathless and petrified
Scary I like it
ReplyDeleteEmily russell from the Wyche 😊
Great words and I really want to find out what happens next but it is a hundred word challenge so... Well I can't find out
ReplyDeleteGood describing words
ReplyDeleteEleanor from the Wyche school
This is great!! Love it!
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