Friday 14 November 2014

Jadzias Dads 100 word challenge

Mr Warne's reputation for being the best teacher in the school was definitely in question with the class four science project. Parents expressed concern and the children from his class who had championed his campaign to be next Head Teacher had ended their once loud chanting of his name and ripped up their colourful banners.

"But sometimes you have to think originally," he groaned as the doctors secured the white jacket around him. "It's a simple case of divided opinions...the rest of the world say a spaceship should be rocket shaped, I say it should be hotel shaped."

3 comments:

  1. Not enough about the picture and and vocab is NOT intresting

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  2. I love the description in your writing very well done

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  3. This peace of writing is great and I like the story but it doesn't use the picture much.

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