Tuesday, 28 January 2014

The pet gorilla

One day there was a boy caled Joe he loved gorillas. In the garden he found a jene lamp and when he rubed it POP!!!There was huge clowed of smoke and then a jene appeared I will grant you one wish to have

I want to have a pet gorilla

your wish is my command ZAP!!! But it wasn't what I  expected it was pink and laughed and was shaped like a bicycule  he was  very grand so I got on it and it spoke to me it said ( were do you want to go said the gorilla)to span

and that was one wierd day











By James.Lloyd
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  1. J@M£$28 January 2014 at 11:26

    Great story James I love the bit about the genie! Don't forget your spelling check!!! James T

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  2. Anonymous29 January 2014 at 01:37

    Well done James this is a quality piece of writing! Just remember to add punctuation and don`t forget capitals at the start of sentences! MJ

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  3. Anonymous30 January 2014 at 10:54

    Well done James just look at spelling and punctuation for me, apart from that very good work James

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