Joe was cycling to
school and it was pouring. Suddenly he glimpsed a shape in the gloom, it was a
bus! The vines were green snakes
covering it and the broken windows were shattered mirrors. Grass grew wild at
the base and the bus didn’t look in any condition to drive anymore. It was
strange because he was sure that vine-covered old bus hadn’t been there the day
before. After the bell went to signal the end of school he took the same route,
it was bright and sunny but the side of the road was empty. Had he been hallucinating…
Very good vocabulary.
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We love your metaphor Ollie!! Darcey and Ben S
ReplyDeleteVery good vocabulary.
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I like the way you added suspense at the end amazing ollie
ReplyDeleteGreat story Oliver maybe a bit more punctuation! From Vicky and Laura
ReplyDeletethe suspence IT WAS A BUS!!!
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