Wednesday, 7 May 2014

100 word challange.


Mr Warnes New Bike

Mr Warne had saved up for his new bike for months. He had seen it in the shop window and finally had enough money to buy it. It had cost him £100. It had a shiny pink basket and a Barbie doll that sat in the basket.

Mr Warne went out side to check on his brand new bike…. Suddenly, Mr Warne turned a deeper shade of red and steam could be seen from his ears. Someone had stolen his bike! He ran inside and told the children, the more the children laughed at him, the more angry he got.
By Eleanor.

2 comments:

  1. ha ha that was really funny I can imagine Immy laughing at that but maybe Noah, have you seen Mr Warne's bike? It really does look like that (I'm just kidding Mr Warne)

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  2. REALLY REALLY FUNNY :-) maybe a bit more punctuation k
    Laura & Phoebe

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