Thursday, 8 May 2014

Ella’s 100 word challenge It was supposed to be a normal day at school, boring lessons, Mr Warne’s bad puns, thats a normal day for me but little did I know today my day was going to be a little different. I truched into the classroom and sat down in my place, Mr Warne took the register: “Dan” “Chloe” “Hey Mr Warne, did you watch the match last night it was a.... whats the word... rubbish” Ben said (now that nights match was absolutely RUBBISH so Ben was in for a shock) Mr Warne turned a deeper shade of red and steam could be seen from his ears. “Worcester Warriors were terrible, they were BEATEN 5 nil, and Ben find a better word for Rubbish” Mr Warne yelled and threw Ben a dictionary.

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  3. I like it. good use of ellipsis and brackets. sounds like a very likely situation.
    ollie cooke

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  4. Thanks ollie

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