Mr Warne's bad day
I was walking to school and when I got there I went to the cloakroom to hang my coat and p.e bag up like usual.When I entered the classroom I put my liason book in the box and put my other things that I needed to hand in,in the purple tray.Then I bumped in to my friend ,Mia.After a short chat we had enough time to play until lessons started It didn't take long before the teacher blew the whistle.We all went to our classes.Mr Warne was taking the register when he started acting strange. Suddenly,Mr.Warne turned a deeper shade of red and steam could be seen from his ears.
really good but, maybe you could work on punctuation, over all it is a good piece of work.
ReplyDeleteWell done Tia very realistic
ReplyDeleteHi I like your work it was intresting ,maybe next time you could right a bit more about the ,over all it was good
ReplyDeletereally good Tia really liked the end sentence manly cause the steam coming out of his ears.
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