Wednesday, 4 June 2014

Chloes 100 Word Challenge

"Right children, we're here", bellowed our teacher.  We were finally here!  Three whole hours of kids shouting in your ear saying "can I have that?" if you've got something yummy in your lunch box.  Honestly, I don't deserve this!  We all scrambled off the coach and formed an orderly line.  Miss called our names from the register ..... Rachel, Livey, Bob .......  But when Miss got to Bob there was no reply.  There was Bob halfway down the road.  "Guys, look at this".  We all sprinted down the road and found an old abandoned bus.  It was as green as my Grandmas pond.  How could this of happened?

2 comments:

  1. Very imagenative, and good description
    -Amber, Dan

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  2. Hi this is Bella and Izzy from the Wyche school,
    The writing you have produced is very intresting and we really like it.

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